After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by ShutterPug:
** Greetings from the Critique Club **

'After the forbidden fruit'

I found this image to be very hard on the eyes, as much is out of focus, and that which is in focus is cluttered by it's surroundings. I really had to search the image to find the mathc with your title - just don't think it was strong enough. Perhaps if you had only the spoon with reflection in the image it would be better.
As for the desat - does not work for me here either.

Sorry I could not be more positive.

- Linda

After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by json:
I cant make heads or tails of this.

After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by davidus428:
photo is too cluttered. viewer cant readily find point of focus. simplify composition next time. imho

After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by ksymeon:
I find this a bit busy and the foregroung being out of focus can't show what you are trying to achieve

After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by alien2thisworld:
This composition is a little to busy for me. The painting on the object to the far right seems to draw the most attention, but doesn't appear to be a main subject. I think simplifying this shot could bring out it's real message better.

After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by hollisterGq:
too busy....don't know what the main subject is....

After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by cadbike:
A bit too busy I think. Maybe brighten a bit as well.

After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by slo007:
Too dark - can't see.

After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by jonr:
This is absolutly not working for me. Total chaos, I didn't see the bottle until after a while, the lightning is dull, and the frog-something in background is stealing all the attention.

After the forbidden fruit
by gerakdepan

Comment by Beetle:
This is very busy and confusing. I think I can see a bit of a fork on the left hand side, but my eyes keep going back to the frog (?) on the right, since that is the only thing with real focus. I don't quite understand what you were trying to do here. 4