Thirst for Knowledge
by ronnyt

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.

First Impression - the most important one:
Lovely stop motion with the water ... good looking kiddy with great taste in hats.

Composition:
This works well ... I also like the reflection in the tap.

Subject:
meets the challenge well .. although she does appear to be watching you ..that just means she is an aware kid.

Technical (Colour and light):
Sorry but I don't really know what you are aiming for with no photog.s comments. This is sharp and well processed.

To grow its vote?:
Candids are hard and something that needs time and patience .. and practice .. .you are doing well.

Summary:
Great shot ... well done .. .can't wait to see more.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Basillica
by ronnyt

Comment by Rebecca:
This would work better if the building were more centered. The building isn't tilted, but I think the off-centeredness of it makes it look like it's leaning to the right. It's a weird optical illusion.

Basillica
by ronnyt

Comment by Emyloy:
wow, i love this, the pathway draws you into it, the only thing is the circle in the middle, i can't take my eye off it, it distracts you from the rest of the photo, its a 9 from me

Basillica
by ronnyt

Comment by marytwitchel:
stunning.

Basillica
by ronnyt

Comment by alpharich:
over sharpened

Basillica
by ronnyt

Comment by mk:
Horizon a bit tilted by nicely processed. Sky seems a *bit* flat maybe

Basillica
by ronnyt

Comment by arngrimur:
Good subject and composition. A bit to heavy on the post processing.

Basillica
by ronnyt

Comment by dcano:
I love the DOF that you created using hyperfocal distance. It colors are a little weird on my computer but then again I have not calibrated my monitor this month.

Basillica
by ronnyt

Comment by espy2:
I'm a big fan of these sharpened type images. It really brings out the detail in the intricate work on buildings and walkways, especially in this image. Very beautiful. A 9 for me!

Basillica
by ronnyt

Comment by Ekenborg:
Would like too see the main object more centered.