Two minutes too early!
by lilylily

Comment by pa_cuthbert:
It's too grainy. I like the concept going on, but it's not captured very well. If this were taken in a more contrasting sky compared to the building I would have rated this a bit higher. The focus isn't all that great. So I gave this a 4.

Drink Up!
by lilylily

Comment by jvchuy:
Would like to see some dropplets of water on the bottle.

Drink Up!
by lilylily

Comment by mkalandros:
Composition is nice, but the lighting is flat.

Drink Up!
by lilylily

Comment by Tammer:
For me, there would be more interest in the photo if the bottle itself were more in focus and maybe more off center. I always find photos more interesting if the main subject isn't quite wo centered. The lighting is a bit strong here and there, but the limes are a nice touch.

Drink Up!
by lilylily

Comment by cycomerlin14:
Mexican piss....hahahaha...

Endeavor
by lilylily

Comment by Di:
** Critique Club **

Lily
Gateway DC-T50 5.25 megapixels

Endeavor is a photograph that has excellent potential. The prospective is good, and you caught the tree at a spot that fits the Title.

The photo has a very, very tight DOF though, and hides all that. Is it possible that your camera was set on fixed focus or on a macro mode? Is it possible that your autofocus is off and needs repairing? This would explain part of the problem. I would like to see other photos from this camera to see. The Focus problem hides the Endeavor.

The coloring is off I believe because of the focus problem. The part that I do see in focus looks to be spot on for coloring with this type of tree.

The crop of the photo could be improved slightly, the branch coming off and up to the top of the picture is distracting and in shadow so it does not look pleasing to the eye. With a tighter crop this would be removed.

Good luck in future challenges :) I̢۪m sure that your future challenges will do well :)


Message edited by HBunch - fixing cc glitch.

Endeavor
by lilylily

Comment by tinmason:
foucs

Endeavor
by lilylily

Comment by pacpinto:
Ugh, too much jpeg compression or what?

Endeavor
by lilylily

Comment by WaysOfSeeing:
What do you want the viewer to focus on within this image? To me it feels extremely busy and lacks creativity. Perhaps to improve the image you could have spent just a little longer in finding an interesting angle or perspective to capture. 4

Endeavor
by lilylily

Comment by LoudDog:
What happened here? The focus is a mess.