Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by karmat:
I love the colors and texture of the sky and cloud. My only comment is regarding the structure on the left. In my opinion, you need more of it, or it needs to be eliminated all together. Right now, it seems to me that being in the frame was an accident! Also, if it is going to be included, maybe have it in a little sharper focus so that it really stands out.

Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by crabappl3:
I'm wondering if this shot would have been stronger without the tower. It also appears that you shot this through a window. That being the case, it threw a reflection at the top center of the picture. Adjustments to the contrast might have made the foreground clouds pop of the page and give a nice contrast to the brightness of the sun.

Tick Tock
by jab119

Comment by ChrisW123:
Cool you did a 10 second exposure...

Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by David Ey:
I fail to see the point of the tower and platform in this picture. To me, for them to be in the shot, the top of tower should be visable (or some interesting feature) as well as some sky (clouds) on the left. I do like the colors, however, the sun is slightly too bright.

Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by RiderGal:
Personally I don't think this photo has any real oomph. I don't really see fabulous colors, or a very striking scene... just a very bland sun with a building in front. No offense or anything. This could be improved with a different crop perhaps? Maybe making it longer? I'm really not sure. Good try though.

Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by tjuneau13:
I like the framing of the structure on the left and the perspective it gives to the photo. The The sun spot makes what is otherwise a very soft picture rather harsh though. = 6

Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by dimitrii:
Good idea, however the image seems flat, the colour looks a bit soft, and the structure's alignment is a bit off. Just an opinion.

Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by Manic:
The colours and textures of the sky & clouds in this shot are great, but its let down by the (slightly out of focus) building on the left, since it distracts rather than providing context. A different crop might also have avoided the greenish patch in the top-centre of the shot (lens-flare?).

Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by HBunch:
Colors are a bit muted, but still a very pretty shot. I really like the clouds. gives me a sense of calmness. the building/structure thing to the left is a good touch. give just enough of "something" to make this interesting. I wonder how this would look if you upped the saturation just a tad. just something to try. good luck in the chalelnge.

Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by goodtempo:
nice composition. i like the drilliing rig 'up in the clouds'. a little more contrast and color correction would improve this photo. very nice creativity.