2003
by jab119

Comment by SharQ:
Fabulous colours and sharpness. Good work.

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Comment by PTLParsons:
Poor lighting. The light in the next room distracts in that corner. The white shirt is blown out looks like by the flash. The top of the photo is too dark, and off colored by the lighting. And you have too many shadows. You couldn't very well crop out the light in that room, so should have turned it off. Need more natural light, or extra lights to light the scene evenly. 4 PTL.

Up in the Clouds
by jab119

Comment by Alecia:
this has the makings of a good photo--i like the composition of the sky--the way the clouds bump up against the sun and then thin out at the top of the frame. reminds me of the sort of sky you see from an airplane. i just can't decide if i like the structure in the left hand corner--normally i would think it worked well for framing, but i really dont know if a sky shot needs any external framing--perhaps the position of the clouds would have worked just fine. the colors are nice, if a little too muted for my taste. the photo has a sort of ethereal quality to it which is nice. i think that if this was my picture--i would take the original, throw it in PS--crop out just the structure on left and bottom--fix the glare at the top and boost the levels a tad to make the colors stand out just a little more. not a whole lot of work for a really nice picture! good work.

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Comment by jimmyn4:
You need to learn how to pack:)

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Comment by mcrael:
Blurry and a little over-exposed on the white shirt.

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Comment by nathaliedoo:
not so original.....missing focus

2003
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Comment by dltruex:
Nice shot. Keep it up. :-)

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Comment by Malokata:
Ah, that'll stuff in. Sit on it.

2003
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Comment by LindaLee:
The top part of the photo really distracts me, but otherwise, I like it.

2003
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Comment by joshua:
too much blur