’Tis of Theeby
xlr8tnComment by BMacD: Hi! Hereâs a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Nice clean lines, nice colours and lighting
Composition:
Perspective of monument seems un-natural. Right side vertical, Left side significant lean. May be optically correct from where you took the picture, but it feels uncomfortable for the viewer. Rotating the picture a few degrees CCW would make it less noticeable.
Too bad you could not have captured the bust in the top third of the frame.
Subject:
Meets challenge
Technical:
Not sure what you did in terms of post processing, but based on your â10â entry, you did do some. Colours, contrast, focus and DOF are really well done.
Suggestions:
You may want to move the burst and add picture to your portfolio. Would be a really great shot!
Summary:
Congratulations on your 11th place finish and your first 6+ shot!