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| 08/11/2003 09:48:30 AM |
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| 07/20/2003 08:25:09 AM |
Dear Johnby orussellComment by inspzil: Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Good strong topic that most of us can relate to. That is something intangible that can sometimes be hard to figure out. You've done great here. This has a great emotive theme to it. The only thing about the objects in the composition that I would have done different is to put the bloom on the flower up instead of down. But that's very minor. The rest of the arrangement is very good.
Technical - I think the mood of this photo is pretty somber and I think that underexposing this to some degree would satisfy the mood a little more. We need to see that the rings are rings and the front of the note is brightly lit. The rest of it could be relatively dark and I think that it would be more emotive. Good sharp picture and I like the toning.
Overall - Nice job with this one O. I think you chose your topic well. A little mood adjustment with the lighting and I think you jump .3 or .4 which is pretty significant. Good work and good luck in the future - Bob |
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| 07/17/2003 11:05:08 PM |
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| 07/16/2003 03:33:30 PM |
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| 07/14/2003 11:19:12 AM |
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| 07/14/2003 10:03:00 AM |
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| 07/14/2003 12:37:49 AM |
37.8° Cby orussellComment by jgal76: Hmm...maybe its my monitor, but i cant make out the full reading on the thermometer. Good pic nonetheless |
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| 07/13/2003 11:32:13 PM |
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| 07/13/2003 05:05:08 PM |
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| 07/13/2003 10:49:19 AM |
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