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03/02/2005 07:15:12 PM |
| Very nicely done. The best part is, anyone could look at this without a title and they would understand it. So many challenge images are hard to 'get' unless you have a personal connection to them. The sepia adds a nice tone to this and goes along with the mood of the photo - you wouldn't want cheery colors to interfere. |
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07/20/2003 08:25:09 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Good strong topic that most of us can relate to. That is something intangible that can sometimes be hard to figure out. You've done great here. This has a great emotive theme to it. The only thing about the objects in the composition that I would have done different is to put the bloom on the flower up instead of down. But that's very minor. The rest of the arrangement is very good.
Technical - I think the mood of this photo is pretty somber and I think that underexposing this to some degree would satisfy the mood a little more. We need to see that the rings are rings and the front of the note is brightly lit. The rest of it could be relatively dark and I think that it would be more emotive. Good sharp picture and I like the toning.
Overall - Nice job with this one O. I think you chose your topic well. A little mood adjustment with the lighting and I think you jump .3 or .4 which is pretty significant. Good work and good luck in the future - Bob |
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07/13/2003 05:05:08 PM |
| Well done, although I'd probably see how it looked with darker overall tones. |
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07/13/2003 10:49:19 AM |
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07/12/2003 12:40:43 AM |
| Great idea ! Definitley makes you wonder. |
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07/10/2003 11:34:47 AM |
| Cool .... a dear john ... 8/10 |
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07/09/2003 11:55:04 PM |
| Nice, visually interesting shot. Overall composition works very well; only problem in my opinion is the slight glare off the table at the top center of the frame. |
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07/09/2003 02:00:55 AM |
| Great composition! Good lighting also. |
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07/08/2003 08:50:42 PM |
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07/08/2003 03:03:32 PM |
| well I have done this a few times, but a I kepted the rings,lol, excellent challenge entry and photo |
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07/08/2003 07:29:48 AM |
| Powerful and full of emotion - this really hit me |
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07/07/2003 07:57:24 PM |
| Just leaving him or suicide? omg hope she just left him :)= great idea Could use a little more contrast (imo) - 9 |
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07/07/2003 02:30:25 PM |
| Bummer! Poor John. Well arranged and super lighting. 9 |
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07/07/2003 10:28:06 AM |
| Hmmm... I can sort of see where this is going. There's a bit of a glare at the top, left of center, and overall the colors seem a bit dark, but I think it meets the challenge. |
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07/07/2003 09:23:24 AM |
| My primary unanswered question is why you took this picture on a cheap plywood table - if this had been on driftwood, the effect would have been a lot more exquisite. Cool idea and good picture in any case. Bit dark, but not bad.) |
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07/07/2003 02:17:21 AM |
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07/07/2003 01:20:37 AM |
Good subject and creative idea. A subject many viewers can feel engaged by. It presents a personal situation.
I would like to see a copy of this in black and white to see what kind of impact it evokes but I think this presentation is much better than a color version. |
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