Faceless Nights
by angela_packard

Comment by L o S T:
realy nice shot it will be on top

Body Shapes
by angela_packard

Comment by mycelium:
wow, this is so sassy! great body language in this shot.

Faceless Nights
by angela_packard

Comment by kevrobertson:
Great use of Backlight.
Love the flyaway hair.
Only voted on 19% so far but this is way ahead (pun not intended...) of the rest.
10 from me

Good luck
Kev

Body Shapes
by angela_packard

Comment by Jutilda:
Wow - I'm surprised at the low score for the challenge. I gave it an 8 without hesitation. I like the nice contrast of the white with the blue and black. It certainly has a shapely theme!!

Body Shapes
by angela_packard

Comment by gjumi:
Wouldn't it be better if you didn't lean forward towards the chair? As it is, the pose looks a bit strange, because I don't see the 3D effect (the curves of the buttock) that leaning is supposed to achieve. A strait S curve would have been better, I guess.
Anyway, a very nice photo...the one at the mother challenge as well...

American Flag
by angela_packard

Comment by sherpet:
I like the composition, but we are world wide here.....

Sisters?
by angela_packard

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

The critique I am doing is for "Sisters?"

First Impression - the most important one:
How cool, your mum is intested enough to be in your picture, and you made both her and yourself look good!

Composition:
I like the composition you used there. There are quite a few comments that you received in voting, really it is up to you, but I think what you did was great.

Subject:
Mum and daughter ... this totally meets the subject.

Technical (Colour and light):
Couldn't get much better really.

To grow its vote?:
Add a baby or young .. I mean most of the top 20 have them - no not needed ... you got there without it.

Summary:
You have done some awesome work .. your portfolio really shows that, and you are going to continue to improve.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Sisters?
by angela_packard

Comment by kari1:
critique to come

Message edited by author 2006-01-12 02:36:29.

Mother Outtake 2.jpg
by angela_packard

Comment by suemack:
This one is fantastic!! I agree with Judy, a treasure to be hung over the fireplace!

Mother Outtake.jpg
by angela_packard

Comment by suemack:
ROFL....this is awesome!! I love the expressions and the thumb sucking! I was a thumb sucker too LOL