Karori
by Slimharpo

Comment by bod:
Starting from the bottom of the frame I really like this ... until I reach the houses. Sorry, but all those buildings are spoiling your photo. Could have done with less exposure to bring out more detail in the sky too.
The bottom third has the beginnings of a really good shot, I like the way the path curves off out of view and the rocks & grass border it very nicely. Just would be better without houses.

Karori
by Slimharpo

Comment by joanns:
Well composed. I like the sky and the sunset pink on the distant hill, that's very nice. I wish it was a little lighter in the forground.

Dont Step On My Blue Swead Shoes
by Slimharpo

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Slim,

I understand your challenge interpretation here quite easily and I'm familiar with the song as well :)

The perspective you chose here could possibly be improved. The image doesn't carry a good sense of any 'depth' to the viewer. A lower camera angle would give a much better sense of depth here I think.

Compositionally, diagonals are usually more impressive as well... if you rotate the camera counter clockwise about 30 degrees, some nice diagonals would appear here :)

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

Karori
by Slimharpo

Comment by karmat:
I like the way the road leads into the picture, and the buildings in the distance add some interest. Except for the one cloud on the far right, I almost think the sky could be cropped down as it is not real exciting. Good exposure.

Karori
by Slimharpo

Comment by kandyj:
Maybe a little increase in Gamma to lighten up the foreground?

Karori
by Slimharpo

Comment by digitallywet:
i don't like the foreground so much, but the best one i have seen in a while of looking 6

Dont Step On My Blue Swead Shoes
by Slimharpo

Comment by jimmythefish:
I think you mean 'suede'...not sure the King would have been walking around in velcro Dunlops...

Dont Step On My Blue Swead Shoes
by Slimharpo

Comment by jgillard:
Uneven lighting. A different angle may of been better. jgillard5

Dont Step On My Blue Swead Shoes
by Slimharpo

Comment by Jacko:
Great song, not so great shot. Velcro sneakers?

Dont Step On My Blue Swead Shoes
by Slimharpo

Comment by Swashbuckler:
I thought his shoes were more "fancy"? Funny, but I can't see this scoring hugely well. Technically good, but low interest factor, title withstanding. 6 Swash