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| 02/16/2004 05:31:44 PM |
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| 02/16/2004 12:50:21 PM |
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| 02/16/2004 06:09:58 AM |
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| 02/16/2004 12:57:52 AM |
Bodyscapeby tariqueComment by Koriyama: This shot is, well, as you said titilating. Well done. You've clearly met the challenge, and I don't think that a pencil would have worked quite as well.
As always, Tarique, good stuff.
(You might think about re-entering this subject in the textures challenge...) |
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| 02/15/2004 08:39:49 PM |
Bodyscapeby tariqueComment by pcody: Something I've thought of doing. Good attempt and you did get the dof technically correct. So you are on challenge. The tones and lighting are good also.
There are a couple of things I might suggest. The towel makes the image look too much like a hospital shot to me. I apologize if there is a reason for it to be there. Try dropping your head down, maybe over the edge of your bed, that way you could do the view straight down the center and get both breasts in the shot. The hand looks oversized. I don't have a suggestion for that other than maybe placing it on your stomach or having the whole hand oof. Great try. You get a 9 for courage. |
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| 02/15/2004 03:00:04 PM |
Bodyscapeby tariqueComment by brownt: :-) Have to smile each time I see this one!
Good idea, good that it's B&W and of course, good choice of subject. I'm giving you a good score, think you'll find a few low ones though!
Well done! |
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| 02/15/2004 02:21:37 AM |
Bodyscapeby tariqueComment by Firstrich1: Great DOF. and wonderful nude. the balance of the shot seems off a bit though. good luck |
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| 02/14/2004 12:22:57 PM |
Bodyscapeby tariqueComment by Neil: Nice idea. I find the cloth doesn't mesh here (excuse the pun) and the black OOF hair a bit distracting. Maybe silk or something more see through might have been nicer than the cloth, which, hopefully no offense, looks like a towel. |
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| 02/14/2004 01:34:06 AM |
Bodyscapeby tariqueComment by MrAkamai: Nice chice going b/w with this shot! Somehow nudes always look better this way. I think it might look better, and more focused, if cropped a lot more off the bottom. I know that sounds radical but i think the large shadow in the lower left corner is grabbing too much attention. If it was cropped out completely, you could also make the rest of the image larger. And, not sure if anything could be done about the odd-shaped shadow between the knees. It's a great image, however. Good luck! 8 |
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| 02/13/2004 05:18:10 PM |
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