Sink Life at Happy Hour
by Malokata

Comment by ChrisW123:
Cool... I was wondering if there were going to be ant pics... How did you get them to line up like that!!?

Castle in the Snow
by Malokata

Comment by Malokata:
Grayce,

Thanks kindly for your critique, it is much appreciated.

Morning at Glacier National Park
by Malokata

Comment by fotofly:
Killer photo, I love GNP. This shot transcends "reality"

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by Malokata

Comment by Malokata:
Thank you for your critique, John, I was really pleased that this photograph was appreciated the way I intended.

Martin

Castle in the Snow
by Malokata

Comment by Gracious:
Critique Club COmments by Grayce
The foreground in the lower left corner frames the image, but is a little busy and takes up too much of the frame. I can't really identify what they are.
Aside from that the structure stands out nicely against the snowy, frosty trees.
You've captured some wonderful texture here. The stones in the walls are good.
The coloring seems nice and realistic, and there is no evidence of digital noise.
Exposure is good, with nice contrast of light and shadow. I'm fascinated by the cold of the snow, while the water isn't frozen.
Regards,

Grayce

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by Malokata

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

I think this is an excellent photo and it seems to have scored very well also. I really like the sharp contrast. It seems to set the mood for 'despair' very nicely in this image. The feeling of loneliness is very strong in this image and that suppports the theme of 'despair' as well. There is just enough detail in the man's face to really make this photo pop.

I don't think I could offer you any suggestions for improvement on this photo because I like it just the way it is :)

John Setzler

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by Malokata

Comment by Malokata:
Thank you all for commenting. I did indeed have a cold, wet butt.

Message edited by author 2003-03-03 22:43:20.

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by Malokata

Comment by civilsavage:
woulda been nicer if it were better focused and maybe framed a little differently (if it were possible)... maybe with the subject taking up a smaller portion of the frame with a larger field of white to the right.

Castle in the Snow
by Malokata

Comment by lisae:
Very busy. I don't think this would work as a stock photo at all. As a free study, it is a little too busy to be appealing to me.

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by Malokata

Comment by DennisF:
I like the composition. Snow is so hard, but I would have liked more detail in the dark figure.