Iron Echoes
by tuffy

Comment by pineapple:
Rhythm certainly; but not exciting.

Iron Echoes
by tuffy

Comment by h2:
good graphic work, toning fits well. Shows something like compression artefacts, though

Iron Echoes
by tuffy

Comment by whiteroom:
great!

Disc Art
by tuffy

Comment by crayon:
very abstract
dont hold my interest for very long tho.
technically good.

Disc Art
by tuffy

Comment by ericwoo:
Nice tonal range, and I think the focuse is crisp. Not sure what the heck I'm looking at, but I think that I like it.

Disc Art
by tuffy

Comment by mystardream:
Interesting image.

Disc Art
by tuffy

Comment by sjturner:
not my cup of tea, sorry

Easter Pageant Rehersal
by tuffy

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Doesn't really appear candid and it got stung for score because of this ...from reading this is not how it is meant to appear .. but its one of those annoying 'shit happens" moments. :(

Composition:
This is not bad .. its doesn't grab me though .. i am not sure why not.

Subject:
well as mentioned and as pointed out by others ... they felt it DNMC .. who cares it is a great stock shot for the portfolio.

Technical (Colour and light):
On first look I thought it was a little washed out .. on second was fine .. I like natural light for taking pics ... which is lovely.

To grow its vote?:
as above .. meeting the challenge in the eyes of the voters helps.

Summary:
Good shot, but as you say .. onwards and upwards.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Easter Pageant Rehersal
by tuffy

Comment by tuffy:
Well, I hardly ever shoot people pics, now I know why. To those who said it was staged, I can assure you it wasn't. I had intentionally framed using the rock and grass to try to show him peaking. I just caught him as he looked up. Oh well, on to the next challenge.

Easter Pageant Rehersal
by tuffy

Comment by espy2:
I'm not much for receiving or giving comments, but since Candids are
near and dear to my heart, I have decided to give comment on every entry
in this challenge.

Cute photo, but doesn't say candid to me. He is looking right at the camera. I like to see shots out of the ordinary or a bit more unexpected for a candid.