Desolated Region
by brentpaugh

Comment by mtreit:
I appreciate the humor, but the photo doesn't work. The shiny spot on the head is pretty distracting. A high contrast black and white shot of the same subject might have worked better.

Swirly
by brentpaugh

Comment by HBunch:
light on your face and shirt is almost a little bright. Can't say this is the most appealing shot in the bunch, but it does show a lot of personality, and that's important. I don't like your lenolium though. Nice to meet you. ~Heather~

Swirly
by brentpaugh

Comment by Arielalala:
ROTFLMAO

Swirly
by brentpaugh

Comment by basia03:
i chose not to rate this one... toilet humor escapes me...

Swirly
by brentpaugh

Comment by wingy:
I can't say I find the concept for this shot to be a good one.

Travel & Leisure
by brentpaugh

Comment by CLarson557:
Hi Brent!

Greetings from the Critique Club:


Composition: You have a very nice picture here that could definately be on the cover of your selected magazine. However, I do agree with some of the comments that you recieved concerning the towel and railing issue. I do believe that the railing is the most distracting of the two. It really does get in the way of the scene in the background. In any event, the model is nicely posed with nice colors. The clouds are beautiful.

Technical: Is is nicely cropped and the focus is good. I do agree that the colors are bland and could be brought out better by some adjustment to contrast. Otherwise it is a nice photo, in my opinion.

Challenge: Definately meets challenge. With the improvements, I could very easily see this on the cover of a magazine.

Keep up the good work with your photography. I checked out your profile to see some of the other things that you have done. I really like your Fenway picture. Will be anxious to see what else you come out with.

I hope this critique is helpful to you.

Connie

Swirly
by brentpaugh

Comment by briphoto:
squirrely

Swirly
by brentpaugh

Comment by ozdick:
Priceless expression and unique perspective. I hope to god that your hair looks wet because of gel and not because ... well I'm sure you know what I'm thinking. Very memorable shot, so I've rated this highly

Swirly
by brentpaugh

Comment by carolee:
A little odd, okay, but the expression makes me laugh. The flash might be a tiny bit strong.

Swirly
by brentpaugh

Comment by Gracious:
good expression, sorry you relate so well with the toilet that you had to included it. It competes for attention. Oh well.