Childhood revisitedby
hannekeComment by fotomann_forever: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Biteme, I love you :-) Your sense of humor and creativity always intrigue me. This is awesome.
Composition:
Composition is not by the rules, but it works for this image. One distraction, however, is the doll's hand. I'd like to see it either not in the frame or more in the frame.
Subject:
Other than being quite amusing, subject is clear and intriguing.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Focus: Sharp, well done DoF is near perfect.
Color: I love your post-process here. Flash-tones may be a bit on the Yellow side though.
Light: Interesting and defining.
To grow its vote?:
Do something pretty and not disturbing ;-) Personally, I prefer your style over ribbon-winning style.
Summary:
Love your style, girl. Keep up this awesome work :-)
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy
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