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Comment by colorcarnival:
I agree, I think this would make a great overlay. As it is, it's too busy and the eye wanders all over the place looking for something to focus on. i would love to see you use this on another picture you do in this challenge - that would be fun.

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Comment by pineapple:
Pairs, harmony. Yet, threes, fives, and sevens, achieve an unbalanced playful composition. I think about what I have learned from studying Japanese gardening and my life in China and Far Eastern arts. Symmetry and asymmetry; I can appreciate both. You remind me to look further into this subject with my own camera.

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Comment by Sonifo:
Oh drats..I hate it when that happens. Nice try anyway. ewww..smoking haha..

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Comment by Sonifo:
Can't go wrong with a tree. Nice b/w.

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Comment by Retroesque:
Lovely gentle image - love the 'pairing'

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Comment by hajeka:
Nice, but small and grainy. Think it needs a better title.

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Comment by ErikV:
Agree with what you and others say about symmetry. Nice lines provided by benches, windows, window shades, etc.

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Comment by Ecce_Signum:
I think your comments already mention what you could do to improve, a simple shot yet begs for stories. I actually like the crop as it focusses us on the subjects.

Just had a wander through your portfolio and if you ever get stuck for a submission here I'd love you to reshoot this (or re edit). With some minor adjustements this would be a corker :)

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Comment by Melethia:
The neat thing about this scene is you can go back and revisit it. Only next time, have your daughter sit on one of those benches. I'm into symmetry as much as the next person - probably more - but to break it in some way, as with a person here, really adds a spark sometimes.

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Comment by trevytrev:
Cool montage of photos, I will agree that a bit of erasing over the barn might add a bit of pop to the barn