Take a Plunge Mister!
by davidus428

Comment by slo007:
Great photo. Too bad we can't see how high the fall is. A little more vertical shot would have given more emphasis of risk and danger.

The Mouse Will Play
by davidus428

Comment by inspir8tion:
The lighting is great in this. And what a great subject.

The Mouse Will Play
by davidus428

Comment by Riponlady:
oh this is lovely. I like mice! good idea and meets challenge

Take a Plunge Mister!
by davidus428

Comment by jtf6agent:
This is pretty cool.

The Mouse Will Play
by davidus428

Comment by Pipon13:
nice

Hi! I'm Bea (Ms. Smiling Eyes)
by davidus428

Comment by Nitin:
Greetings from the critique club

David, this is a wonderful portrait. Its 'speaking' so to say. I really like the composition, including the spoon in the hand and the printed t-shirt, as they tell me something about the subject. The crop is just right.

It appears to have been taken indoors (based on ISO/aperture), yet the lighting is nice and soft and works well here.

If you were looking for ways to add some extra punch, you might want to sharpen the eyes a bit more, and/or dodge them a bit to brighten up the catchlights.

Overall, I like this portrait a lot. As the last commenter pointed out, its hard not to smile with her when looking at this portrait.

I hope you found the critique helpful. Please feel free to PM me if you have questions.

The Mouse Will Play
by davidus428

Comment by KarenNfld:
Very cute photo

The Mouse Will Play
by davidus428

Comment by kena:
Awww. Very cute ^-^. Nice picture, meets the challenge too.

The Mouse Will Play
by davidus428

Comment by Ivo:
Gotta love those toilet rodents! Excellent photo and good luck.

Destination: TOP!
by davidus428

Comment by Tammer:
For me, I find the foreground object distracting, but you probably couldn't help that. Very cool ceiling.