Red Carpet Stroll
by davidus428

Comment by hotpasta:
a little soft in the focus for me...sorry

Three Brothers
by davidus428

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
great colours ... impressive that you got the stop motion with the waves and drips.

Composition:
Not to have cropped this is great, but am unsure how you ended up with those dimensions without cropping.

Subject:
Meets the challenge ... and does so well.

Technical (Colour and light):
maybe a little over-saturated ... now if only you could get them to stay perfectly still .. no that wouldn't be candid :)

To grow its vote?:
Top 20 I wouldn't complain.

Summary:
Good shot ... lovely image and great capture.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Three Brothers
by davidus428

Comment by cmeier:
What a bright, cheery image! Great colour in a wonderful candid moment -- well done!

Three Brothers
by davidus428

Comment by steven:
captures the essence of youth.

Three Brothers
by davidus428

Comment by chugginrail:
good.....:0

Two-Inch Bug!
by davidus428

Comment by Neuferland:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Thought this looked familier, I commented during the challenge! This is a nice shot, the yellow does stand out but the focus is immediately drawn to the bug and as a result you might have lost a few points for that when people voted.

A slightly different crop to balance the shot more also might have increased the score just a bit. Other than that and what I already commented on, I'm sorry I don't have much else to add.

Hope my comments have helped and Good Luck in future challenges!

Deannda

Three Brothers
by davidus428

Comment by Fantastic_Machine:
It's too saturated! Still good.

Three Brothers
by davidus428

Comment by Jayne <3:
cute

Three Brothers
by davidus428

Comment by CyBri2000:
Really cool picture. Looks like fun!

Three Brothers
by davidus428

Comment by espy2:
I'm not much for receiving or giving comments, but since Candids are near and dear to my heart, I have decided to give comment on every entry in this challenge.

Children are way to easy to get candids of. This is cute, and does tell a bit of a story (hot day, get wet), but this can also be seen every day just about anywhere. It really has no wow factors for me as a candid. It's a 4 for me, based on technicals and color.