thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by sg10:
I would like it better if the numbers didn't line up. I think it would make it more natural. It also seems a bit fuzzy (face) but otherwise I really like it.

thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by alanfreed:
A little on the yellowish side... maybe something that could have been corrected with white balancing?

thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by HBunch:
Just fire it into the corner, you're bound to get one of them in. :) I like the angle and framing/cropping of this shot. The set up could use some work though. It looks TOO set up in my opinion. I think that the numbers all facing the camera is a bit odd and unnatural looking. your lighting source is great. You did a good job of keeping harsh glare off the balls. Nice shot. Good luck in the challenge. ~Hbunch7187~

thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by mikon:
I like the composition. Cool!

thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by Sonifo:
Interesting, makes me look at every detail, but the lighting is so yellow.
Vote 6
Sonifo

thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by catpixel:
There's alot of potential with this idea. I'm no photography gearhead, can't suggest what to do interms of lightmetering, field depth etc, but from an aesthetic point of view this appears a little flat.

thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by goodtempo:
needs color correction, white light balance.

thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by wingy:
too dark.. a brighter light would have made the colors stand out more and the shadows on the table much more effective and drawing. Also I'm not sure if I like the pose of the guy in back and the parts of him that are shown, cut out. Perhaps a little bit more complete view of him, or an even more minimalistic suggestion of his presence. Good idea, but the technical side needed some work. 5 wingy

thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by DrJOnes:
poor lighting. B&W would have helped. Try converting it and increase the contrasts. nice effort. 4

thoughts alone
by takethat

Comment by johnny_justjohnny:
balls set up a little too organized, looks staged, sorry but that's a pet peeve of mine. either it's set up and that doesn't matter, or it's candid and not staged, and never the twain shall meet. but that's just me. you did a nice job.