Still and Speedy Steel
by takethat

Comment by Turbotech:
Does the Photo fit the Challenge (6)
Colors(5) think the white balance is off
Composition(6)
Focus(5)
Background(6)
Lighting (5)
Title (6)

Overall Score: (5.57 rounded to 6.0)

Still and Speedy Steel
by takethat

Comment by mcrochip:
You found the right place to be for this shot - very nice.

Still and Speedy Steel
by takethat

Comment by justine:
Just a wonderful shot. I like everything about it...YOUR tied with another as my pick to win.

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by sulamk:
Critique Club
COMPOSITION -CONTENT - I would have tried to have given more emphasis to the beautiful floor in this image and definitely not included that thing at the back that appears to have two headlights! I think a different angle might have helped to rid you of some of the distractions such as the blown out windows.
CAMERA WORK -TECHNICAL - Exposure is not bad considering the difficult lighting
DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - Would have benefitted from some playing with the levels and usm as the image is a bit soft
YOUR OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I wished that I could visit this beautiful place!

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by Turbotech:
Nice composition.

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by inspzil:
Good photograph with the potential to be a great one. Biggest thing I don't like is the window on the right is blown out. This would be better I think if the pic was taken at a different time of the day for lighting reasons. Also I might try to change the angle so that this gorgeous walkway was still fully visable and the grey things on the right were more in view. With them on one side only, it looks a little unbalanced. as is it is a really nice shot. Good job - Inspzil

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by GeneralE:
I have a few shots from there -- great building to photograph!

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by jjbeguin:
Good subject well rendered. Perhaps a little more fantasy in the composition could still improve it.

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by PTLParsons:
Not realling exciting but wonderful depth to this shot. And all so clear. Great job. Is it blue like this naturally or did you colorize it? Nice job. PTL 8

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by andrewm:
Beautiful floor--this looks like a cathedral!