The Eternal City
by thorgils

Comment by salmiakki:
I really like this shot, but do find the other photographer a little bit distracting.

The Eternal City
by thorgils

Comment by dfstevenson:
Would have been a better photo for me without the person

Benny Crespo's Gang
by thorgils

Comment by cryingdragon:
Greets from the Critique Club
This photo is a great shot in low light. The hand and arm moving do distract from the quality of the shot.

The colors and crop are good. It looks like it might be a bit smoky in there, which works.

I guess the biggest problem with the photo is tieing it to a cultural event. I don't see how it fits.

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--Mike

Benny Crespo's Gang
by thorgils

Comment by Perfect-Calamity:
I like the motion in this photograph.

Benny Crespo's Gang
by thorgils

Comment by Blackstarlight0:
cute photo

Benny Crespo's Gang
by thorgils

Comment by graphicfunk:
Nice colors.

Benny Crespo's Gang
by thorgils

Comment by summerlovin:
great shot, but i don't really like the blurry hand, sry 7

Benny Crespo's Gang
by thorgils

Comment by aabatkinson:
to bad his hand is moving

Phantom of the ruins
by thorgils

Comment by PaulE:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Thorgils,

Well done for going for such a different concept for your submission. IT's always a bit of a risk to try these sorts of things on DPC. Per the comments you have already recieved this is haunting, or a bit spooky - depending on how you interpret it. In this respect you have doen a greta job of layering the 'phantom' into the ruin in a convincing fashion. I only part a bit less convincing is the side of his face where his left eye is - because the background is much lighter there it looks a bit odd. I think the whole would have been better if you had shrunk the phantom and shifted him to the left a bit.

It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.

Cheers
Paul

Benny Crespo's Gang
by thorgils

Comment by onejumpjohnny:
nice exposure, well captured, good detail and clarity