My Grandfathers possessions
by thorgils

Comment by hotpasta:
excellent shot...not sure about the composition, cropping, but lovely lighting suits this image

My Grandfathers possessions
by thorgils

Comment by blazingmoonlight:
Excellent set up. The glare from the flash bothers me a bit...makes the watch/earrings(?) look glossy & new...the subtle tones would look really great using a softer lightsource (window light, etc.) The texture in the book is incredible!

Broken glass
by thorgils

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting framing here .. a little soft on the focus ...

Composition:
I like that the boat is in the single frame here ... it works on that ... the angle of the pic also works to me.

Subject:
meets the challenge .. I really hope this wasn't really your bedroom .. cos no shot is worth getting pnuemonia.

Technical (Colour and light):
I like the darkness it adds to the mood .. but the shot itself is soft and a little out of focus.

To grow its vote?:
I think this did well ... it is a solid shot .. and nicely emotive .. the sky being blue may have added .1 but I think that is all ...

Summary:
Your work is a little like mine in consistency going through periods of fantastic and ok .. but never "bad" ... keep up the work towards the consistency and improvement.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Broken glass
by thorgils

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Object outside the window isn't clear

Broken glass
by thorgils

Comment by LalliSig:
Cool window you found there, too bad the sky isn´t breattaking, that would have nailed this shot.

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by thorgils

Comment by Node:
I really like this photo. Not sure but something is missing.

Broken glass
by thorgils

Comment by bvoi:
Good subject and emotion. 9.

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by thorgils

Comment by Nobody:
This is nice. Good colors, just enough light in the frame itself to give it some character. 7

Broken glass
by thorgils

Comment by 2mccs:
Nice composition and beautiful sky

Broken glass
by thorgils

Comment by k4ffy:
seems soft and there isnt' really a subject in this photo.