Blue Skies on the 16th Floor
by esdarby

Comment by Kristen02:
Great angle. I love that the reflection in the window matches the sky. Well done.

Blue Skies on the 16th Floor
by esdarby

Comment by Riponlady:
lovely sky meets challenge

Sweet Revelation
by esdarby

Comment by Chiqui:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

I like the lighting in this image, it is even and flattering. I like the composition too. I find the background a little distracting, specially the bright areas by the model's face. Perhaps a slightly different angle would have taken care of that. Another thing that bothers me is that her eyes seem to be closed, I would have liked to see them. The soft focus works well here, the image is soft but not blury. This is a good image that could be greatly improved with just a few minor changes. Keep up the good work.

If you have any questions or comments about this critique, please feel free to PM me.

June

Blue Skies on the 16th Floor
by esdarby

Comment by ksnyman:
Don't like the blue dark cast to the top.

Blue Skies on the 16th Floor
by esdarby

Comment by xylke:
Seems rather plain. Is this a building? The sky seems too blue.

Door Number 3
by esdarby

Comment by ktm7:
nice. person seems SO much smaller than the doors...good job.

Door Number 3
by esdarby

Comment by amyjosmith:
Love the woman on the steps.

Sweet Revelation
by esdarby

Comment by cdcootie:
Really liked this. I thought the barely soft focus and restrained saturation was perfect for the shot.

Door Number 3
by esdarby

Comment by oOWonderBreadOo:
i love this one perfect for perspective too! 9

Leveling the Field
by esdarby

Comment by madison461:
If everyone thinks so, then it must be! No, this isn't a conspiracy. It's paranoia!