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09/22/2005 06:20:28 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
I like the lighting in this image, it is even and flattering. I like the composition too. I find the background a little distracting, specially the bright areas by the model's face. Perhaps a slightly different angle would have taken care of that. Another thing that bothers me is that her eyes seem to be closed, I would have liked to see them. The soft focus works well here, the image is soft but not blury. This is a good image that could be greatly improved with just a few minor changes. Keep up the good work.
If you have any questions or comments about this critique, please feel free to PM me.
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09/19/2005 07:50:36 PM |
| Really liked this. I thought the barely soft focus and restrained saturation was perfect for the shot. |
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09/14/2005 10:41:46 PM |
| Nice include of the flowers. |
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09/13/2005 11:30:29 PM |
| Looks a bit out of focus to me, but I like your composition and the lighting. |
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09/12/2005 04:52:16 PM |
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