Relief from the Heat
by margiemu

Comment by MTPixels:
What a refreshing image. The only thing I would do is crop out the end of the hose on the left creating even more negative space to the left which wouldn't hurt a thing IMO. Great job!

down time
by margiemu

Comment by Oddfrog:
Hi!

I like the diagonal line your body forms in the photo.
The lighting is good. Is it just me or is it out o focus on the right side?

good job!

down time
by margiemu

Comment by Qart:
Very pure and nicely executed. Great job! 8

down time
by margiemu

Comment by yanko:
This photo is nice and sharp and full of color and clarity. The camera settings you used and the lighting worked out great so good job there. I also like the composition. The main focus is off-center and I view this image from left to right which is natural for me.

The only suggest I have for improvement is maybe having your mouth closed or show teeth. You seem to be in the middle of that which gives you an odd expression. Other than that I like the pose. You got a nice catch light in your eyes and your hair flows well through the image. Good job all the way around.

the Agony of Defeat
by margiemu

Comment by ericwoo:
Great tonal range and very interesting composition. I also like the depth of field taht pushes the viewer right back to the tear and the heartbreakign look on her face. The only element that bothers me is the teardrop on the tip of her nose. It almost adds anxiety to the frame based on knowing how annoying that tickling feeling really is. Still, very well done.

the Agony of Defeat
by margiemu

Comment by MacDonald:
returning to comment:
This shot shows raw emotion - not overdone.. lit perfectly (imo) very well photographed, one of my top scoring shots

down time
by margiemu

Comment by Photonurd:
Nice portrait, very pretty!

down time
by margiemu

Comment by David Ey:
very pretty and a well chosen set....10

the Agony of Defeat
by margiemu

Comment by Lilhoop:
i like how light reflects in her tears. really adds an affect

the Agony of Defeat
by margiemu

Comment by amandalore:
hmm, you portrayed someone actually crying really well, though I would have preferred the fake cliche style with tears running down cheek, not dripping from nose or mascara goop in corner of eye, but you have really good focus and nice emotion and I think this pic looks great in B&W, nice work