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Relief from the Heat
Relief from the Heat
margiemu


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Heat (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF 28-80mm f/2.8-4 L USM
Location: front yard
Date: May 16, 2006
Aperture: 11
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/640
Date Uploaded: May 16, 2006

 It hit 85 degrees here in May - that\'s HOT for this neck of the woods. My kids had a blast \'posing\' for this one. (and laughing at me sprawled in the dirt trying to shoot up at them in order to get sky as the background - which wasn\'t easy considering we live in the land of many trees). I waffled back and forth on cropping in tight on just my daughter, or leaving in my son, who was holding the hose on her.

cropped a bit,adjusted curves, and did usm after resizing.

Statistics
Place: 81 out of 158
Avg (all users): 5.4590
Avg (commenters): 7.0833
Avg (participants): 5.1746
Avg (non-participants): 5.6083
Views since voting: 1357
Views during voting: 461
Votes: 183
Comments: 17
Favorites: 3 (view)

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AuthorThread
 06/20/2006 09:30:39 PM
No way this one should have scored where it did. Great job.
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 06/09/2006 04:57:32 AM
CTPII
Wa-hey... why the low score? I just don't get people... this was one of your best shots, maybe even the best.
The water's mid-air freeze and your kid's expression made this shot, IMO. Nice vibrant colours, too.
Should've scored higher.
Personally, I'd go for a tighter, vertical crop -- cutting off the hose and some of your girl's body. A little sharpening would've helped, too, I guess.
A nice photo, all in all.
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 06/04/2006 10:46:33 AM
Hello from Álex, CTP MkII

First Impression: very funny and well done shot
Composition: very good.
Subject: very accurate to the challenge.
Technical: very good focus on her, the speed is good for freezing the water, colors are nice
Improvement: maybe you could play with selective colors to achieve a bluer blue on the sky.
Summary: Very good job, should have scored better IMO

Álex
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 05/30/2006 01:28:25 PM
Hi Margie!

I love this! Making one of my favourites!! The comp is great, the lighing is great and the colours are great! Its just a great pic!!!

Well done
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 05/29/2006 01:56:21 AM
Hey Margie -

I am actually surprised this scored so low. I don't normally divulge what I scored any image, but seriously? I scored this one an 8. I thought it was a fantastic depiction of heat. The girl's expression is perfect, the suspended water is great. I even like the off-center crop. The light is a bit harsh, and that was just about all I had to criticize here. Perhaps a bit of Unsharp Mask might punch this up a bit?
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/28/2006 11:53:39 PM
awesome shot!!! 10
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 05/28/2006 11:47:01 PM
photography more than anything else is the art of capturing a moment. 8
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 05/28/2006 06:38:27 PM
The sky is a bit noisy here but a great capture, nice composition but am not sure about the hose/bottle in the shot? a great summertime shot (bumping to a seven)
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 05/27/2006 03:26:22 PM
i just did that to my daughter great shot!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/26/2006 01:17:18 PM
Excellent idea for the challenge.
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 05/26/2006 06:29:09 AM
What a refreshing image. The only thing I would do is crop out the end of the hose on the left creating even more negative space to the left which wouldn't hurt a thing IMO. Great job!
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 05/23/2006 07:20:43 AM
Quite nice capture and good image though I could belive it would had worked better if the challenge was "cold". 6
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 05/22/2006 10:05:33 PM
This composition needs a little work. The image quality is ok. The subject matter is ok. This picture could be a little more creative.
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 05/22/2006 06:06:22 PM
This shows cool more than heat although she probably was hot. But 7 for creativity plus the girls is very cute
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 05/22/2006 06:04:18 PM
The caption says "relief from the heat," the picture says, "nice and cool."
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 05/22/2006 08:16:16 AM
HEE HEE - I thought of doing something similar. I like it. Great stop action. I might adjust levels to up depth of the sky color, but otherwise, well done.
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 05/22/2006 12:45:21 AM
excellent! great shot and title..perhaps a little soft on the focus...8
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