Misty Sunrise on the Lake
by marmalade1121

Comment by notonline:
see below

Message edited by author 2005-08-09 09:42:57.

Misty Sunrise on the Lake
by marmalade1121

Comment by notonline:
Beautiful shot. I find if you decrease the brightness by _5 and increase the contrast by +5 you will see a little more silohouettes then what is shown. I also find it doesn't follow the rule of thirds very well even tho I kinda like the composition. I think the steam off the water is outstanding.

L Girl On Her Way Down
by marmalade1121

Comment by armelle:
Thank you for your comment.

I wanted to repay the favor and comment on one of yours. Like everyone else, I LOVED your Moody Broody Beauty entry but I also really liked this one. I love the expression on her face and the black and white works very well as does the soft focus.

There are two small distracting things in the photo that could get cropped out (in my own humble opinion :) A bit of the left end side of the photo and a tiny sliver on the right side (the left hand corner is hard to figure out and took my eyes away from the main image and the top most right hand corner also distracted my eye...). I do like the empty space on the right side of the photo though!

Very well done! She'll be happy to have that photo when she grows up!!!

K Smiles
by marmalade1121

Comment by Jutilda:
I love this nice natural pose. Her eyes looking up and over is really appealing. The focus is soft but not overly fuzzy. Good job.

K Smiles
by marmalade1121

Comment by Jutilda:
Very nice capture. I like the tight crop.

Road to Illumination
by marmalade1121

Comment by Jutilda:
Lovely!

He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not
by marmalade1121

Comment by marmalade1121:

Originally posted by Cody28: Good idea, but since when would a girl have fingernails like this? Really detracts from the photo as it's all I focus on.

Dude, it's a little kid's fingernails. That's my daughter's hand.

He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not
by marmalade1121

Comment by Cody28:
Good idea, but since when would a girl have fingernails like this? Really detracts from the photo as it's all I focus on.

He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not
by marmalade1121

Comment by dagaleaa:
great simple, but creative idea! I like the focus, and the composition

Moody Broody Beauty
by marmalade1121

Comment by tsheets:
I really like this image. Her expression is great, love the DOF and B/W. bump