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| 10/26/2005 01:16:38 AM |
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| 10/07/2005 12:43:22 PM |
Friendshipby LKMoteComment by sfalice: Greetings from the Critique Club
What a great shot of that butterfly with the contrasting bright red of the flower!
Now, I realize that with nature subjects, you can't always get your subject to pose just the way you want. So, this instance, I think that if you flipped this image counter-clockwise so that the flower is on the left, and the butterfly on the right, it would go a long way towards helping the composition. (butterflies seem to feed from any angle, so it would not seem unnatural) Also, I would have loved to see that entire cluster of red blossoms included in the image. And of course, the 'frosting on the cake' if the whole thing could have been centered in the frame.
Still, it's a good image, and I wish you good luck in future entries in DPC. |
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| 09/30/2005 10:32:10 AM |
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| 09/27/2005 03:22:28 PM |
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| 09/15/2005 01:41:05 PM |
Flowersby LKMoteComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Hello Again. What really stands out to me in this shot is the focus and DOF. Very nice focus on the front flowers, fading into a DOF that not only provides something neat in the background, but also helps to prevent anything in the background from being distracting from the subject.
This is definately contrast. I'm thinking it might be on the border of being just contrast and high contrast though. There is enough bright areas in the background, to make the black seem like an afterthought, and the flowers themselves, while being white could definately be brighter to help add to the contrast. So while it's contrast, I think there is possibility to be higher contrast. If that makes sense.
I think someone else mentioned the placement of the flowers within the frame. They are a bit too centered for my taste as well. I'm thinking I'd like to see them maybe just a tad lower into the lower right corner and have a bit more of the background negative space showing toward the upper left area.
I think the black and white works well here.
~Heather~ |
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| 09/11/2005 10:02:07 PM |
Flowersby LKMoteComment by CLarson557: Beautiful crisp and clean picture. Excellent DOF. I feel as if I could reach out and physically touch the petals. Nice contrast. 9 |
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| 09/11/2005 06:51:06 PM |
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| 09/11/2005 11:38:08 AM |
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| 09/11/2005 11:21:10 AM |
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| 09/11/2005 11:20:39 AM |
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