Yes madam, the first set you tried definitely looked the best!
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Comment by PoetryInColor:
Funny, but hard to see what's going on. You need a little more light.

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Comment by sestevens:
You know, I hate saying this because I think this photo has a lot of potential...there's just too much stuff going on here - in the way of lines and grids and how those varying lines and grids all have different perspectives and vanishing points...in other words, it lacks focus. I might suggest next time doing a shot like this actually pulling yourself away so that there's not so much distraction.

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Comment by bobdaveant:
a bit distracting, but original.

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Comment by _Io_:
Queued for ages, been there, done that :)
The wires at the top look over sharpened.

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Comment by docurrie:
The heavy lines runnig through this are distracting. Also the smoke or cloud to the right.

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Comment by metoecus:
The (mostly) horizontal lines are very distracting, particularly since they cut through the only person who's trying to attract attention to himself. I think that you may have been better off cloning out the offending bar, even if it also required removing the person.

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Comment by DottieD:
wow, incredible capture

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Comment by terje:
Very cool angle, I like the metal infront!

The bridge opened and the heavens did too!
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Comment by Prime_Time:
other than the umbrela, I can no evindence of rain. Looks pretty dry.

The bridge opened and the heavens did too!
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Comment by SJCarter:
Neat shot, but there's so much going on that I think the main subject loses a little impact. The sky is a bit distracting too, but I like the natural colors and the perspective.