Shhhhhhh.. don't bother me, I'm playing
by EllieNeufer

Comment by YourBuddyFlo:
Its kind of blurry

Coffee & Sugar
by EllieNeufer

Comment by ttreit:
I like the concept, but the sugar seems really blown out and even the sugar bowl is overexposed a bit. I think a more neutral lighting of the sugar would have helped.

Coffee & Sugar
by EllieNeufer

Comment by saiphfire:
what's the thing on the right? cream? highlights are blown a bit and it makes it hard to identify

Coffee & Sugar
by EllieNeufer

Comment by digidori:
Original.

Coffee & Sugar
by EllieNeufer

Comment by glad2badad:
An 'A' for effort! Had to have taken some time to put that together. Fun concept with the photo. I think your composition is fine (perhaps a bit tight), but I think you may run into some issues with the exposure as the sugar dish is a bit hot. Overall, a good job. Good luck in the challenge.

Coffee & Sugar
by EllieNeufer

Comment by Ennil:
The milk should have been in another cup. Otherwie not bad idea. Next time try not to use flash.

Coffee & Sugar
by EllieNeufer

Comment by Tammer:
If the white wasn't quite so bright (donning my sunglasses) :-) I would have scored this higher. I like your idea alot though. Shows creativity.

Coffee & Sugar
by EllieNeufer

Comment by metoecus:
While the white background is okay, the sugar has crossed the line between high-key and overexposed. In general I think if you have to include text to make your image work, you should probably reconsider your approach to the subject. This might have been more interesting if it was more minimalistic; a B&W shot of a single coffee bean half-buried in the sugar, for instance.

Coffee & Sugar
by EllieNeufer

Comment by sodastreamer:
sugar is too over exposed - i suppose that the nature of the beast , also your "n" from "and" looks like a "m".

Coffee & Sugar
by EllieNeufer

Comment by patrinus:
if sure had had better detail, this photo would have been much better, unfortunately Im not sure if sure is in fact sugar or milk or a defective spoon