"Modern education"
by squeeky jee

Comment by KarenNfld:
Nice set up, lighting needs work, image is dull

"Modern education"
by squeeky jee

Comment by Lilhoop:
nice composition the angle is great not to dead on but not to tilted either

"Modern education"
by squeeky jee

Comment by hamsandwich:
good comp and pov, lighting is the biggest problem to me

"Modern education"
by squeeky jee

Comment by talmy:
The lighting needs to be improved. Also the focus point is where??

"Modern education"
by squeeky jee

Comment by Claya:
Overall composition is technically OK but point of focus seems too low to me and I'd have liked to see the calculator on.

"Modern education"
by squeeky jee

Comment by yourbuddyjhawk:
not enough values

"Modern education"
by squeeky jee

Comment by Artifacts:
The arrangement and composition of this image is fine.

Lighting and color could be improved. The shadow of the calculator distracts from the image. Adding lighting from the right would mute the distaction, illuminate right side detail and add interest to the image.

White balance is off which gives it a yellow hue that should be corrected in post processing.

You might also consider shifting your central focus point from the center of the calculator to the "5" on the keypad. That would excentuate the effect of your shallow depth of field and minimize the distracting effect of having the near foreground slightly out of focus.

"Modern education"
by squeeky jee

Comment by megano:
this could be my homework...