Tiny Bubbles
by TheStick

Comment by posthumous:
sorry this is way too interesting and mysterious to score well. Beautiful abstract.

It's 4 you.
by TheStick

Comment by two40:
has a mobile in the picture. is that enough to convey mania?

It's 4 you.
by TheStick

Comment by bimble:
A good technical picture. Nice DOF, I like the lighting.
but... it just doesn't do anything for me

It's 4 you.
by TheStick

Comment by oldbimmercoupe:
drama

It's 4 you.
by TheStick

Comment by Ice-Tea-1983:
If it's for me, why is the phone facing the wrong way?
Did you take this photo with that phone?
My only complaint, and this is only to nitpick, is that you could have wiped off the phone before taking the shot.

Tiny Bubbles
by TheStick

Comment by bassbone:
I liked the image - nice and clear, good conversion to B/W (gave you a 6 during the challenge) - but most of the bubbles were not circles. That probably hurt your score some.

UnUseD
by TheStick

Comment by Judi:
Hi, Greetings from the Critique Club:

Composition: I can see what you were trying to achieve, but there is just no life...no focal point in the image. If you had placed one ornament on that shelf...a bit of colour...it would have given this image some life.

Technical: Technically you are on the right track. The focus is good as is the lighting. But there are some areas that need cleaning. If you were after the old look...then make it look really old and worn. This item just looks dirty. So I would suggest cleaning up the marks and brightening it up.

Overall: I know this critique sounds harsh but I am only saying this to help you with your future entries. You need to treat DPC as a client...and this is generally what they look for. You have 4 seconds to make an impact with the viewer and hold them there. So look at your image...and see if there is anything of major factor that would hold them. If not....look at improving it in whatever way you can.

Good luck and please keep trying.

Time Attitude
by TheStick

Comment by cislander:
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Tiny Bubbles
by TheStick

Comment by KenHimura:
Well done!

Time Attitude
by TheStick

Comment by ScubaSteve13:
this is a very cool pic... i like the way the silver is all in the watch good going