At the soccer game
by jjbeguin

Comment by dsidwell:
I really enjoy the extremes in saturation and exposure here. It adds a feeling of artistic action. The three frames work well together, though the folks in the upper left frame seem to be looking, at first, at the guy with the umbrella. 9

The extravagance of yesterday's commercial waterways
by jjbeguin

Comment by pncowley:
Fantastic architecture... as well as capturing the transportation aspect of the challenge. --10

At the soccer game
by jjbeguin

Comment by casualguy:
Lovely shots with great emotion. Good job.

sticker project 1c
by jjbeguin

Comment by chickadee:
are the clouds ment to be visible through the shutter in the top left section?
It is creating a bit of a distraction for me.

sticker project 1c
by jjbeguin

Comment by ChrisW123:
Pretty good idea using a mechanical apprature. I also like the placement of the URL and logo.

At the soccer game
by jjbeguin

Comment by inspzil:
I like the top 2 pictures ok. The bottom photo is just too dark and oversaturated. The dirt on the player is blue slightly. I'm rendering a guess as to who took this photo....

sticker project 1c
by jjbeguin

Comment by tyrkinn:
Nice, good idea

At the soccer game
by jjbeguin

Comment by Jacko:
Love the top right photo. Excellent expression. I love high key images, however the top left seems a bit blown out. I love the bright over saturated colours in the bottom, but I'm not sure if it all ties in together. Good luck.

Osteospermum ecklonis / South African Flora
by jjbeguin

Comment by Paige:
Critique Club

Hi there, I have admired your photography for a while and am quite humbled by receiving one of your shots for critique:)

First off, I love this shot, the flowers have a glow to them that is very pleasing to look at.
Your composition is perfect, the placement of the flowers are right on.
Your DOF and focus are right on too.
The one thing that distracts me is the background, it looks dirty, cloning now would do this photo wonders. Not sure what you could have done at the time, maybe a black sharpie.
Thanks for showing me a flower I have never seen and good luck in future challenges (yeah, like you need it) :)
Congrats on 4th place too!


Message edited by author 2003-05-01 19:21:31.

sticker project 1c
by jjbeguin

Comment by LobsterClaws:
I don't like the colors of the text, but the design is cool.