In Shining Armorby
inspzilComment by Annida: Good Morning from the Critique Club:
First Impressions:
Wow! Cool chess set, I wish I owned it. I think your score shows that a lot of people agreed with me! I also think the lighting is a bit dim for the subject, but could that be avoided? I know inside shots are very difficult to deal with.
The composition seems ok with me, although it seems you may have lost points somewhere because of the background being a bit distracting. The reflections of the pieces on the table are also a tiiiny bit distracting.. a nice dark cloth could have saved you from that.
I like the effects of the sparkles on the closer pieces.. did you try actually setting out a game to make the composition a bit more interesting? I suppose that wouldn't be very cliche though. I think in the end you lost some points because the only chess piece that was mostly in focus was on the corner left, with some sparkle on it. Usually that filter works better if ther's only one sparkle, in my opinion.
My own opinion is that this picture definitely meet the challenge, and I also admit that I liked it, and gave it a high score. Good luck in future challenges, I look forward to seeing more of your work! :)