House of faithby
marvinComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
First thing I notice is the strange angle of the building. Without you stating in your photographer's comments what your intentions were, I can only offer my personal opinion, and that would be to have straightened up the building. I also don't know what software you used for editing, but would suggest using a distortion correction tool of some sort. A quick google search will come up with lots of solutions.
It just looks odd leaning like that for no apparent reason. I realize that sometimes it's nice to have a dramatic angle on a photo, but when 1/2 is dramatic angle and the other 1/2 is normalish looking, it seems awkward.
Focus appears good, but it looks oddly sharpened. The vertical lines that are all close together are jagged and almost hurt the eyes.
It is an interesting building, and would love to see more detail in the building. Maybe closer up? Instead of the entire building get just a part of the building?
The color seems bland. I mean, the sky is bright, almost too bright, but there is just nothing that really stands out to me in this photo. It doesn't draw me in and hold my attention for long.
Were you figing with the lighting conditions? The almost too bright sky and the dullish colors make me think that it wasn't ideal shooting conditions. Not your fault, but maybe could have tried at a different time of day?
Overall, interesting building, but just not sucking me in.
~Heather~