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by dimitrii

Comment by robsmith:
Are you deliberately hiding in the shadows? Possibly a little too much black on the left which could have been cropped

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by dimitrii

Comment by Koriyama:
striking, effective use of negative space and key

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by dimitrii

Comment by Gracious:
I think a portrait should reveal some character, or emotion of the model, by showing expression in eyes or other facial features. Did your picture accomplish that? Yes, in a mysterious sort of way.

artistic/creativity? Creative lighting

Technical? good

Overall? Good composition and interesting.

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by dimitrii

Comment by eweb:
slightly too dark

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by dimitrii

Comment by The Kid:
i feel it is a bit too dark, not easy to judge the right kind of light is it?

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by dimitrii

Comment by Gordon:
classic lighting, great.

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by dimitrii

Comment by GalyNet:
Are you french?
Shot well done with the dark side!

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by dimitrii

Comment by SharQ:
Not bad, but I would have moved the light an inch forward. this way, it looks as though your nose is floating in mid-air. (5)

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by dimitrii

Comment by f-32:
excellent technique!

In a New York Moment
by dimitrii

Comment by autool:
Critique Club Critique

Title: In a New York Moment, by dimitrii

Composition: You have an interesting composition, taken only by an experienced New Yorker. Having never been to NY, I probably would have been looking straight up and all of my shots would be from the low angle. Your perspective projects the definite feeling of the hustle and bustle of the big city from a point of view not normally seen in a postcard.


Technical: The intentional blur has a rewarding effect on the picture. You have used this effect to its fullest advantage to portray the feeling of the picture. Even with the camera movement to develop the blur, your focus appears to be dead on.


Challenge: You have an unconventional picture of the most popular city in the world. I am not sure if it would work to get people to come visit, or if it would cause them to stay away, but either way you have met the challenge in a very special way.


Suggestions: Your experience far exceeds mine and in my opinion you are a very good expressionistic photographer. I have no suggestions for your picture and keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing it with us.



Disclaimer:
Bear in mind that I am here to learn, just as many others and any comments that I have made are not intended to be offensive in any way, and are only constructive criticisms. If you wish to comment or discuss this critique please feel free to do so at any time.
Thank you,
Dick Pattee (Autool)
Autool@attbi.com