Despair
by naomik

Comment by vbd70:
great shot!

Despair
by naomik

Comment by Brin:
Great pose and expression. Excellent capture!

Despair
by naomik

Comment by willow_zzen:
well captured, like the bw choice, very effective

Despair
by naomik

Comment by NathanWert:
Definately gets the mood of dispair, but the hair cut is highly distracting.

midas jewellers
by naomik

Comment by graphicfunk:
Lighter bodied type would have made this even better. Nice composition. Bumping up.

yellow t-shirt
by naomik

Comment by Structor:
I like the composition and the atmosphere in this photo.

midas jewellers
by naomik

Comment by NathanWert:
Love this. The font works great too. Only thing I'd like is to have a little more negative space UNDER the rings.

yellow t-shirt
by naomik

Comment by Barry:
My questions about this image are, Why do you title this image "Yellow Shirt"? Is the shirt the most important element of the image? Is the title you decided on, souly for the purpose of this challenge? If so, why not title the image "Left Shoe"? Or "Sock" The Point I am making is that if you choose a title it should have something to do with the main point of the creation. Here it is obvious that the little girl is more important than what she wears.

Meets challenge Description........10 (I believe the description is more about Isolation than mimimalism)
Meets the definition of Minimalism..10..(the way you framed this images seems to me to gives me more insight about the girl.

Technical..... 8 for the most part I think this image is fine except for some electronic artifacts the can be seen at the base of the wall.

Artistic.....10 The framing of the vents in the wall really add something to this image.

Average score..................9 Nice image needing a little bit of work on technical. Nice job and I hope you are in the running.

yellow t-shirt
by naomik

Comment by muckpond:
looks a bit overly compress. note the jaggy lines in the grates and in the folds of her clothes. great composition -- just a not-so-great photo.

midas jewellers
by naomik

Comment by GeneralE:
That's pretty gold gold alright; nice detail.