OOO's
by joansuzy

Comment by graphicfunk:
An undisputable collection of "O"

OOO's
by joansuzy

Comment by messerschmitt:
nice..crispy..candy

GATES TO HEAVEN (OR HELL)
by joansuzy

Comment by rex:
*Critique Club*

Like I said in the comment during voting. First thing is the car takes a lot away from this image. Now that I have looked at it a little longer I would say it would be better if you would have gotten in a little closer to show the detail in the stone and the iron gates. Being this far away leaves my eye wandering all over for something to fixate on. Also getting closer would get rid of the shadows from the trees that are on the road. I find the shadows almost as distracting as the car. As far as color goes you have a nice blue sky and some good red tones in the leaves around the stone. The red is hurt by the shadowing on the right. It is in good focus. The photo is a bit too small. You can submit up to 640 pixels or 150kb and you should utilize every bit of that. Read the tutorial on "Using Photoshop to Prepare Photos for DPC Challenges" if you haven't yet. You can find it here //www.dpchallenge.com/tutorial.php?TUTORIAL_ID=26

What I would have done to improve this is to get in closer and make the gate with the stone columns my main subject and point of focus. You have a good idea and with a little work you can greatly improve this. Maybe even go back on a day where there is a few more clouds in the sky and maybe around sunrise or sunset. Usually at these times you can get some wonderful yellows, reds, oranges, and blues in the sky and that would greatly improve your subject.

I look forward to seeing more of your work.

OOO's
by joansuzy

Comment by gerimedic:
Lots of colour and the sweet packets give it some meaning. Quite nice

OOO's
by joansuzy

Comment by lucifero:
too much reflections, probably due to the flash

OOO's
by joansuzy

Comment by Tallbloke:
The lighting seems to have gone very very wrong and spoiled this shot with potential.

OOO's
by joansuzy

Comment by pwm6:
The lighting on this is a bit harsh so that there is a blow out on the left package. Otherwise a pleasing design.

OOO's
by joansuzy

Comment by mlhop05:
Nice, maybe a little less light reflection on the candy would have made this easier to look at-

TIME on MY HANDS
by joansuzy

Comment by Nitin:
Could look better in black and white

TIME on MY HANDS
by joansuzy

Comment by 2Shay:
I like the contrast of the background and fingers. Nice sharp focus.