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Nikolai1024Comment by fotomann_forever: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
It says a lot about this photo that I remember it vividly from the challenge. It took the spirit of the challenge and produced a memorable image.
Composition:
Composition is interesting and quite strong. Perhaps the subject should have dominated the composition a bit more.
Subject:
Clear, well defined and quite interesting ;-)
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Focus looks a bit soft to me, but I think this is from the noise in the image rather than missed focus.
Colour : Good B&W treatment, but I'd like to see the contrast bumped up just a bit.
Light: Light is good, exposure is good.
To grow its vote?:
Tough challenge, but I think the noise hurt you a bit.
Summary:
A well executed take on this challenge. As I said in my opening statement, you've created a memorable image.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy
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