Valerie
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Comment by szalona:
i dont know if you did it on purpose for the photo to be blurry if so you got it. personnally im not a fan of the blurry stuff.

AnyThing HELPS
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Comment by espy2:
I'm not much for receiving or giving comments, but since Candids are
near and dear to my heart, I have decided to give comment on every entry
in this challenge.

This is just ok for me. It has a story to it and all, but it falls short for me. Not one of my top pics. I also would have given it better tones and the focus is off on the subject and seems to have fallen more towards the traffic. Just not a top pic for me.

Valerie
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Comment by LalliSig:
Too bad this is out of focus, that and some better lighting and you would have had one heck of a good shot, I like her expression. This with a dark or even black backround and some soft lighting that would leave smooth shadows over her face would have been ace. You´ll get there.

Valerie
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Comment by Amason:
This photo lacks focus on the model's face and the background should be more blurred. placing the model further from the background could help and a use of smaller aperture setting if possible.. The position of the model is ok.

Valerie
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Comment by MayaM:
The focus is too soft:-( But, the lighting is nice and so is the composition.

Valerie
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Comment by jrtodd:
Very soft focus, almost to soft.

Valerie
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Comment by weisz:
too soft.

Valerie
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Comment by bseifipour:
Face is out of focus.

Valerie
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Comment by hanneke:
I'm sorry to say it's out of focus. I think the most important thing in a portraitphoto is that the eyes are sharp.

Valerie
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Comment by Majanka:
It's out of focus, too bad, because it's a very nice pose.