Souvenir
by lionelm

Comment by Isabelle:
QUE MEDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10!

Souvenir
by lionelm

Comment by PTLParsons:
Awesome. Are these painted on the shutters? This must be an old place. This photo speaks volumnes. I love it.

Souvenir
by lionelm

Comment by LindaLee:
Very interesting shutters, but the superimposed image would have been a lot more effective for me if they had been in a window and not over top of the shutters.

Souvenir
by lionelm

Comment by Turbotech:
This is cute. Did you add the snow effect too??? LOL

Souvenir
by lionelm

Comment by teachme53:
Very nice!!! I like the use of the two images, the cloths, hair, and stance reminds you of a time long ago. This goes well with the old window. Excellent (10) John Gill

Yoghourt
by lionelm

Comment by indigo997:
HEY! I think that most comments suggest that your white level is a little off. Was the background actually pink? because it looks like it may have been white originally. I'd rather not see it on white either though as I think another color works better. Perhaps a dark color would help. The reflective surface already makes the lighting seem very harsh. Was it diffused? Because of the type of surface and lighting, it's hard to tell for sure how good the focus is. The edges on the bottom part seem to be rather soft and not as distinct as they could be. As an abstract, this isn't as critical of course.
I do like the shape, but if I had been voting in "milk" then I'm not sure I would have really gotten the connection between this photo and the topic (without the title which I try not to rely on). Including atleast the top part of the container might have helped anchor it in dairy more.
It's a very abstract shot which probably didn't help the score any either. Of course there is always a trade-off in pleasing the crowds and pleasing yourself. I actually like abstract shots and wish they did better here. There's also a lot of blank space which IMO isn't really adding much to the image. I really like the blue and wonder if you couldn't have shown a bit more of it along the bottom.
Overall, nice abstract that could be tweaked - fits the challenge but just barely.

Souvenir
by lionelm

Comment by Alecia:
whoa--trippy--like two little ghosties! maybe i warped myself on stephen king, but this is pretty scary! ;)
i really like the monotone coloring and the rain coming down---adds to the spookiness! nice work!

On the Road
by lionelm

Comment by Gracious:
Critique Club Comments by Grayce M. Dillon aka Gracious

The first thing to strike me about this image is the coloring. Yellow and red are both vibrant and cheerful.
The next thing to attract my attention is the familiarity of the subject. Quite universally appealing I think.
I like that you composed the picture with the sign off-center.
There is a line across the center, dividing the image in half. Not especially pleasing. The other drawback is the over-exposed windows. I understand the problem is that by seeing through the bus the highlights were unavoidable. Perhaps the solution may be to expose for the windows, or maybe eliminate the windows completely with a different composition. The coloring here makes a very worthy subject.
Focus is a bit too soft, and saturation could be boosted as well.
Regards,

Grayce

Souvenir
by lionelm

Comment by Digipixer:
This is great!! Love to see this on a "Ghost Tour" .Great job!

Souvenir
by lionelm

Comment by connie:
This is a very interesting image... I would love to see this cropped to that line right above the window. Great job...... I've enjoyed viewing this one.