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arnitComment by jimmsp: Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) Γ’ Quite good. I like her being centered, as the lights then tend to radiate out from her. ItΓ’s too bad the safety bars are so visible, as they detract from the photo. And if she were only a few cm taller, the lights would not hit her lip
(2) BACKGROUND Γ’ I would have like to have seen more well defined moving headlights; especially on the right, where they appear as one blurred object, except for the red lights.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL Γ’ A good job. For this challenge, I might have tried to reduce the flash intensity so her face did not dominate; though it is a very pretty face.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL Γ’ Excellent. No apparent changes needed.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO Γ’ Very good idea and execution. The model tends to dominate, though, and she is not the one in motion. The lights in motion need to be enhanced some.
Jim msp