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Comment by KingLok:
Nice shot.

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Comment by Swashbuckler:
Very, very cool idea!! The execution is nearly perfect, too. Was this one image divided or three separate shots? (I think it's three, but it's hard to say for certain) The strings of the "still" balls seem to have a bit of motion. Here's a complete nit for you...the shadows of the outside still balls aren't quite parallel with the other four (really, no score impact, just pointing out a tiny, insignificant flaw) 9 Rob the Swash

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Comment by MarionH:
the motion looks great :)
neat idea and well executed

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Comment by dsidwell:
Dividing this shot into three helps bring a scientific dissection mood to things. Very appropriate. 9

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Comment by Jacko:
Excellent symmetry. You could only pull that one off with three im ages. Smart set up. Jacko. 9

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Comment by bruster54:
Stunning! Great subject for the challenge! Sharpness and motion displayed effortlessly in your work!

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Comment by Gekker:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

FIRST IMPRESSION:
Beautiful flowers

COMPOSITION:
Nice simple shot of the flowers. My only suggestion here would be to try cropping a smidge off the bottom, top and a bit off the left side.

TECHINICAL:
Very nice dof. I like how the eye is led from the bottom right up and out to the top left. Dof is underestimated on this site, and you used it very nicely. I like how the focus is on the flowers on the right, and great focus too. Nice use of natural sunlight, I think it worked quite well for you. I would however, try boosting the hue on green, it makes the flowers stand out more, and the background nicer.

OVERALL IMPRESSOIN:
A nice picture but lacking that wow factor that makes for winning photographs. I do however think that this has a lot of potential with just a few minor adjustments.

(btw, my first critique club critique, hope your not too disappointed.)
Good luck in future challenges!
Gekker

Message edited by author 2003-04-30 17:04:15.

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Comment by jjbeguin:
Graphically pleasing. would try to move the images to the top, leaving a larger band of black at the bottom, to break the overload of symetry in the composition. 8

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Comment by Morgan:
Sir Isaac would be proud. 7 Morgan

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Comment by ChrisW123:
It's too hard to tell what's going on here although it's a good idea.