Shadow
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Comment by bvoi:
Even though this is a negative challenge, I think that the subject should still be the element of relative highest contrast. I like how the horse is framed and is looking in the camera.

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by sonnyh:
You're making me hungry.

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by swenner:
I like it a lot and would have rated it higher but it seems a bit out of focus. (Although perhaps this was the desired effect.) Good luck.

Shadow
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Comment by TrynityRose:
That's kinda funky, it's like a ghost horse. The stare s/he's giving is kinda unsettling in a neat way.

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by mpeters:
The slightly out of level sill bothers me a little. But, nice color combination and exposure.

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by KarenNfld:
Very nice, great colours and textures.

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by DrAchoo:
Nice colors and composition. Could you have zoomed back just a bit to see more of the framing window? the red and blue contrast nicely and I like the warm tones of the bread. The bread on the left looks just a bit soft. 6

Earth Mover
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Comment by CEJ:
A lot of interesting things going on here...almost too busy with the reflections and changes in depth across the image. I start out looking at your subject but very quickly wander to the background. Looking at it a few more minutes I find myself looking through your subject and around it bypassing your subject altogether. The wheel seems a bit dark. The rust can handle this. But perhaps if the wheel was a little brighter to get more detail of the surface as well as making that yellow stand out a bit more may have helped to keep the subject the point of focus.

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by Ken:
I like it, but would have been nice to see more of the window.

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by margiemu:
now I'm hungry!! I'm so distracted by the yummy looking bread, that I'm not sure I can comment subjectively on the photographic merits of the picture!