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Comment by jrtodd:
Fit the challenge but seems forced. There is noting to really catch your attention. Showing the entire building against the sky may have come off better to me. 6

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Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club:

I think the comments you received during the challenge sum up the strong points about your entry pretty well, dynamic lines, sharp, vivid color. Looking at the top ten scores from this challenge, six were close-ups/macros (Abstracts) and the other four were landscapes. Your image falls somewhere in between these two categories. Your image fits the challenge well but the subject you chose was a little busy, with lines going everywhere, shady and sunny areas, and what ever that is in the bottom left corner. The only suggestion I might have to improve your score would be to zoom in on one the elemental groups in your image to simplify the composition. My choice would have been the tightly grouped bunch of reeds in the upper right corner, the ones that have the strong sun light. I think this image is done about a well technically as you could have done and I look forward to seeing more of your work in future challenges.

Tim

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Comment by chele:
love these kind of rustic shots.

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Comment by twm122:
Nice focus

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Comment by Tlemetry:
Did you use a circular polarizer? There is some glare on the glass and the The only real shadows you have are inside the window. A better angle of light might have added some depth to the wood grain.

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Comment by violinist123:
Nice idea, meets challenge, interesting subject. Way, WAY, too sharp.

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Comment by littlegett:
cute little guy. a Differnt angle would have been great. Nice colours nice dof.

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Comment by angela_packard:
and there it was...hiding...interesting take! 9

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Comment by crewmnd:
Love the lighting

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Comment by posthumous:
great dynamic lines. 8