Touch Me Not!
by doctabrez

Comment by OneSweetSin:
Greetings from the Critique Club

For starters that pose just doesn't say delicate to me it says some other things but not delicate.

As others said your background is distracting go for a solid background or design the wallpaper there would have made a nice background but the door doesn't work with the wallpaper for a background.

You are a little off with the focus and it doesn't seem to be intentionally soft.

Your lighting here works.

Down The Drain!!!
by doctabrez

Comment by Elaine:
I don't get a sense of movement, to me it looks like she is hanging on not sliding down. Sorry if I'm wrong.

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Comment by Jammur:
Definately an interesting POV, but I don't think it demonstrates the motion aspect of the challenge.

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Comment by whiteroom:
weeeeeeeee, you could have gone bigger!
still cool shot

Touch Me Not!
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Comment by wavelength:
if you're going fo delicate, then have the model act delicate. this exudes a position of feminine power and seduction. focus is off or you forgot to sharpen for web viewing, need an even background, or one that adds to the message.

Touch Me Not!
by doctabrez

Comment by UNTITLED:
Interesting pose by the model. Good tight crop, maybe could be a little lower to include the thighs and elimate the empty space at top. Backgound is too busy and detracts from the subject.

Touch Me Not!
by doctabrez

Comment by RonnieJ:
doenst look delicate to me.

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Comment by MIN-BITER:
don't touch me ?

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Comment by NVPhoto:
shes hot, but for this challenge?

Touch Me Not!
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Comment by reification:
While you have an incredibly attractive model here, not sure how delicate she is appearing and there are some focus/sharpness issues.