Stargazing since 1611
by RulerZigzag

Comment by JLC:
Nice focus on your instrument, and nice composition.

Halfway Across
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Comment by Spitfyr:
Nice colors. Should have cropped out the two sticks in the water...would have made a cleaner image.

Nature's Lounge
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Comment by LMA128:
wow! i LOVE how soft the fur looks! great job!

Nature's Lounge
by RulerZigzag

Comment by cutout:
sweet 7

iMode 2.0
by RulerZigzag

Comment by Matthew:
Hello from the critique club

You have a good start in a better looking model than MAK (Hanae's other half)! Only joking if you read this MAK...

This image scored pretty well and you have some good comments already. I think that you did a good job of getting the set up right, and it is definitely recogniseable.

Areas where is falls short of Hanae's attempt are in the lighting a little - you have a yellow tinge (which you could have sorted in post-processing), and the lighting is not as strong. To make light more harsh, you need to use a smaller light source and/or move it further away - but at the expense of brightness (requiring longer shutter times).

Your subject looks a little more crumpled than Hanae's MAK - this distracts a little as the folds lead the eye away from the phone.

You have sharpened your image less than Hanae did - I think that Hanae's image is a little oversharpened, but somewhere in between your images might be my preference.

Good luck with your next challenge.

Cheers

Matthew

Nature's Lounge
by RulerZigzag

Comment by psart:
Oh dont eat that grass you know whats next. lol psart 7

Nature's Lounge
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Comment by whatdewuc:
Cute...

Nature's Lounge
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Comment by digifotojo:
Very nice.

Nature's Lounge
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Comment by disdatmac:
Oh so very cute and sweet!

Rockerfeller's Office
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Comment by staticoy:
hey, it is a really really ridiculously tall building!