A Fine Line...
by Edward Main

Comment by takinou42:
does it fit to the challenge?

A Fine Line...
by Edward Main

Comment by jayak:
A neat picture, I just don't think it works well in this challenge...

A Fine Line...
by Edward Main

Comment by cyan:
not quite the right lighting for this shot

A Fine Line...
by Edward Main

Comment by TroyMosley:
umm ther is like no bokeh here at all,

A Fine Line...
by Edward Main

Comment by smardaz:
cool, nice and clean

A Fine Line...
by Edward Main

Comment by zarniwoop:
the dof isn't unlimited, so your photo technically does contain bokeh. It's not very good bokeh though. I like the strong lines and the shade of blue on the badge; the subject, on the other hand, leaves me a little cold.

A Fine Line...
by Edward Main

Comment by JeffDay:
this is more dof than bokeh

A Fine Line...
by Edward Main

Comment by tjbel05:
Im not seeing your Bokeh. IMHO you should have cropped out the orange light.

Fear This...
by Edward Main

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Nicely focused and a very nice depth of field use. I really like the isolated subject that you achieved by using the blurring of your background.

Lighting: I think that you needed a bit better lighting on his head and face to really help bring his features out.

Composition/Content: Shifting your shooting point of view down a bit would have really helped out your composition of this one. I'd like to see his head more toward the top of the frame, as well as the ability to see the rest of his gloved hand that is cropped out of the image.

My Opinion: With a better composition and maybe a little fill flash, I truly believe that your scored would have grown considerably.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

Fear This...
by Edward Main

Comment by whatdewuc:
Love lacrosse, my guy started this age and is now on highschool varsity and jv squad. Nice DOF, little soft good luck.