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08/19/2008 12:48:36 AM |
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05/17/2007 04:31:21 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Nicely focused and a very nice depth of field use. I really like the isolated subject that you achieved by using the blurring of your background.
Lighting: I think that you needed a bit better lighting on his head and face to really help bring his features out.
Composition/Content: Shifting your shooting point of view down a bit would have really helped out your composition of this one. I'd like to see his head more toward the top of the frame, as well as the ability to see the rest of his gloved hand that is cropped out of the image.
My Opinion: With a better composition and maybe a little fill flash, I truly believe that your scored would have grown considerably.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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05/09/2007 04:37:41 PM |
| Love lacrosse, my guy started this age and is now on highschool varsity and jv squad. Nice DOF, little soft good luck. |
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05/09/2007 10:32:22 AM |
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