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| 04/29/2005 02:54:25 AM |
Stuckby msdoubletroubleComment by Zoomdak: Greetings from the Critique Club!
I'm glad I've got one of your images because I think you have a great potential =).
Composition: The tacks have a nice random order, with is interesting to the eye. I think this image would be a little more pleasing if you had a little larger crop to placed the central focus (the tacks) in a rule of thirds intersection. The background you've used is quite interesting too, though I wish it was more colored to true white then it is now. One idea: if you tried a lower angle shot, focused on one of the tacks and maximized the reflection there.
Technical: The first thing that shouts at me is image size. With the camera you have, cropping is not a problem for image size, even if the crop is a very small part of the original. I really like seeing images at the full size of 640 to see all the detail of the image. The image also seems a bit off color, and a tad dark.
Overall: I like the idea, I like the image, but I think with a little more practice/training it could be superb. |
| 04/29/2005 02:10:25 AM |
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| 04/28/2005 08:45:37 PM |
Fire and Iceby msdoubletroubleComment by fplouffe: Light a bit too strong on the diamond. DOF just a little too shallow; the right side of the ring is out of focus. Good composition. |
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| 04/28/2005 03:40:13 PM |
Heaven's Heroby msdoubletroubleComment by saracat: I really like the cloudscape. I think, though, that because it is such a beautiful background that it overpowers your subject. My eye is especially drawn to the light in the center of the cloud formation, and the parasailor (?) seems to just fade into nothingness (it may in fact fall into my blind spot when I look at the lit clouds). |
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| 04/28/2005 03:39:54 PM |
Heaven's Heroby msdoubletroubleComment by SDW: Very nice shot but you subject is overpowered by the clouds IMO. This is a hard challenge to vote on and I think there is a lot of gray area so I will not say you did not meet the challenge. Good photograph 6 |
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| 04/28/2005 11:30:42 AM |
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| 04/28/2005 10:30:49 AM |
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| 04/28/2005 10:02:37 AM |
Fire and Iceby msdoubletroubleComment by glad2badad: This is a bit too closeup for my taste. It might work with a different color background but the red is overpowering and I'm not seeing any fine detail and color in the diamond(s). Some shades of blue work very well with diamonds. Best of luck in the challenge. |
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| 04/28/2005 08:03:19 AM |
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| 04/27/2005 08:25:19 PM |
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